Poem 2/3

Original:

Five Numbers

Suddenly you smash into the wall,

Which leads to a purely instinctive reaction.

Immediately you glare at the bold lights and gaze 

For what is actually quite unexplainable.

You find five numbers awaiting your reaction

They lie in a significant order that surprises you.

And in that moment, nothing matters more 

Than the excitement that follows 

And those past endless hours, 

Which rearranged those five numbers.

Revision:

Five Numbers

Suddenly you smash into the wall,

Which leads to a purely instinctive reaction.

Immediately you glare at the bold lights and gaze 

For what is an unexplainable feeling

There you find five numbers awaiting your reaction.

They lie in a significant order that never fails to surprise you.

And in that moment, nothing matters more 

Than the excitement that follows 

And those past endless hours, 

Which rearrange those five numbers time and time again.